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Add a dash and the word “all” before the verb “are” in the sentence below:

“Our intelligence, our wit, our cleverness, our unique personalities are simultaneously ‘our own’ possessions and the world’s.”

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Add a dash and the word “all” before the verb “are” in the sentence below:

“Our intelligence, our wit, our cleverness, our unique personalities – all are simultaneously ‘our own’ possessions and the world’s.”

          – Joyce Carol Oates, “New Heaven and New Earth”

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