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To write more concisely and emphatically, make every word count.

Eliminate the redundant category in the following sentence.

After all the talk, I was disappointed the changes were cosmetic in nature.

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  Writing for Business and Pleasure            Home
  Copyright by Stephen Wilbers
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Weekly Tip

To write more concisely and emphatically, make every word count.

 

Eliminate the redundant category in the following sentence.

After all the talk, I was disappointed the changes were cosmetic.

For additional exercises in avoiding redundant categories, see Concise writing: Techniques to eliminate wordiness.

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