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Editing for Errors
  Each of the three paragraphs below contains five common errors.
Editing for Errors
  The errors range from major to serious to minor.
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  A single major error will undermine your credibility.
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  A single major error will undermine your credibility.
Major errors are relatively easy to find.
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  One or two serious errors will undermine your credibility.
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  One or two serious errors will undermine your credibility.
Serious errors are somewhat more difficult to find.
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  Two or three minor errors will undermine your credibility.
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  Two or three minor errors will undermine your credibility.
Minor errors are the most difficult to find.
Editing for Errors
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Editing for Errors:
Major Errors
   Here’s the problem:  My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer’s I’ve ever seen.  So one day he told me the errors I was making were effecting our company’s image and hurting it’s reputation.  He told me I needed to make less errors.  So I’ve decided  to work on my writing skills, however, I know   I have a long way to go.
Editing for Errors:
Major Errors
   Here’s the problem:  My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[’]s I’ve ever seen.  So one day he told me the errors I was making were effecting our company’s image and hurting it’s reputation.  He told me I needed to make less errors.  So I’ve decided  to work on my writing skills, however, I know   I have a long way to go.
Editing for Errors:
Major Errors
   Here’s the problem:  My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I’ve ever seen.  So one day he told me the errors I was making were effecting our company’s image and hurting it’s reputation.  He told me I needed to make less errors.  So I’ve decided  to work on my writing skills, however, I know   I have a long way to go.
Editing for Errors:
Major Errors
   Here’s the problem:  My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I’ve ever seen.  So one day he told me the errors I was making were [e]ffecting our company’s image and hurting it’s reputation.  He told me I needed to make less errors.  So I’ve decided  to work on my writing skills, however, I know   I have a long way to go.
Editing for Errors:
Major Errors
   Here’s the problem:  My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I’ve ever seen.  So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company’s image and hurting it’s reputation.  He told me I needed to make less errors.  So I’ve decided  to work on my writing skills, however, I know   I have a long way to go.
Editing for Errors:
Major Errors
   Here’s the problem:  My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I’ve ever seen.  So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company’s image and hurting it[’]s reputation.  He told me I needed to make less errors.  So I’ve decided  to work on my writing skills, however, I know   I have a long way to go.
Editing for Errors:
Major Errors
   Here’s the problem:  My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I’ve ever seen.  So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company’s image and hurting it[ ]s reputation.  He told me I needed to make less errors.  So I’ve decided  to work on my writing skills, however, I know   I have a long way to go.
Editing for Errors:
Major Errors
   Here’s the problem:  My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I’ve ever seen.  So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company’s image and hurting it[ ]s reputation.  He told me I needed to make [less] errors.  So I’ve decided to work on my writing skills, however, I know   I have a long way to go.
Editing for Errors:
Major Errors
   Here’s the problem:  My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I’ve ever seen.  So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company’s image and hurting it[ ]s reputation.  He told me I needed to make [fewer] errors.  So I’ve decided to work on my writing skills, however, I know I have a long way to go.
Editing for Errors:
Major Errors
   Here’s the problem:  My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I’ve ever seen.  So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company’s image and hurting it[ ]s reputation.  He told me I needed to make [fewer] errors.  So I’ve decided to work on my writing skills[,] however, I know I have a long way to go.
Editing for Errors:
Major Errors
   Here’s the problem:  My boss is a terrific writer – in fact, one of the best writer[ ]s I’ve ever seen.  So one day he told me the errors I was making were [a]ffecting our company’s image and hurting it[ ]s reputation.  He told me I needed to make [fewer] errors.  So I’ve decided to work on my writing skills[;] however, I know I have a long way to go.
Editing for Errors:
Serious Errors
   Although, I realize a person who      works hard, eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and I am discouraged.  Between you and I, my boss, who is   vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.
Editing for Errors:
Serious Errors
   Although[,] I realize a person who   works hard, eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and I am discouraged.  Between you and I, my boss, who is   vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.
Editing for Errors:
Serious Errors
   Although[ ] I realize a person who   works hard, eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and I am discouraged.  Between you and I, my boss, who is   vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.
Editing for Errors:
Serious Errors
   Although[ ] I realize a person who   works hard[,] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and I am discouraged.  Between you and I, my boss, who is   vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.
Editing for Errors:
Serious Errors
   Although[ ] I realize a person who   works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and I am discouraged.  Between you and I, my boss, who is   vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.
Editing for Errors:
Serious Errors
   Although[ ] I realize a person who   works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and [I am] discouraged.  Between you and I, my boss, who is   vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.
Editing for Errors:
Serious Errors
   Although[ ] I realize a person who   works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and [       ] discouraged.  Between you and I, my boss, who is   vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.
Editing for Errors:
Serious Errors
   Although[ ] I realize a person who   works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and [       ] discouraged.  Between you and [I], my boss, who is vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.
Editing for Errors:
Serious Errors
   Although[ ] I realize a person who   works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and [       ] discouraged.  Between you and [me], my boss, who is vice president of marketing makes an occasional error himself.
Editing for Errors:
Serious Errors
   Although[ ] I realize a person who   works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and [       ] discouraged.  Between you and [me], my boss, who is vice president of marketing[ ] makes an occasional error himself.
Editing for Errors:
Serious Errors
   Although[ ] I realize a person who   works hard[ ] eventually will succeed, sometimes I feel overwhelmed, disheartened, and [       ] discouraged.  Between you and [me], my boss, who is vice president of marketing[,] makes an occasional error himself.
Editing for Errors:
Minor Errors
   I went to college in the ‘70s.  When I graduated on June 3, 1979 I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here’s a style manual.  Use it to  do a first rate job on this report”.         His approach is somewhat different    than mine.
Editing for Errors:
Minor Errors
   I went to college in the [‘]70s.  When I graduated on June 3, 1979 I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here’s a style manual.  Use it to  do a first rate job on this report”.         His approach is somewhat different    than mine.
Editing for Errors:
Minor Errors
   I went to college in the [’]70s.  When I graduated on June 3, 1979 I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here’s a style manual.  Use it to  do a first rate job on this report”.         His approach is somewhat different    than mine.
Editing for Errors:
Minor Errors
   I went to college in the [’]70s.  When I graduated on June 3, 1979[ ] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here’s a style manual.  Use it to  do a first rate job on this report”.         His approach is somewhat different    than mine.
Editing for Errors:
Minor Errors
   I went to college in the [’]70s.  When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here’s a style manual.  Use it to  do a first rate job on this report”.         His approach is somewhat different    than mine.
Editing for Errors:
Minor Errors
   I went to college in the [’]70s.  When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here’s a style manual.  Use it to  do a first[ ]rate job on this report”.      His approach is somewhat different    than mine.
Editing for Errors:
Minor Errors
   I went to college in the [’]70s.  When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here’s a style manual.  Use it to  do a first[-]rate job on this report”.      His approach is somewhat different    than mine.
Editing for Errors:
Minor Errors
   I went to college in the [’]70s.  When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here’s a style manual.  Use it to  do a first[-]rate job on this report[”.]   His approach is somewhat different    than mine.
Editing for Errors:
Minor Errors
   I went to college in the [’]70s.  When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here’s a style manual.  Use it to  do a first[-]rate job on this report[.”]   His approach is somewhat different    than mine.
Editing for Errors:
Minor Errors
   I went to college in the [’]70s.  When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here’s a style manual.  Use it to  do a first[-]rate job on this report[.”]   His approach is somewhat different [than] mine.
Editing for Errors:
Minor Errors
   I went to college in the [’]70s.  When I graduated on June 3, 1979[,] I thought I knew it all, but just yesterday my boss said, “Here’s a style manual.  Use it to  do a first[-]rate job on this report[.”]   His approach is somewhat different [from] mine.
Editing for Errors
  If you found all 15 errors,
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  Congratulations!
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  If you did not find all 15 errors,
Editing for Errors
  If you did not find all 15 errors,
keep working!